It's not terrible. I do understand what's actually happening in the storyline so that's a plus. I give 3.5 stars because it does look as though a little kid made it, but that's the point I assume [?] because it is pretty cool, and I know it takes a lot of time to create the characters, and make the slides because there are probably 1000 frames in this small clip. I do appreciate that you took the time to do one, but I do however recommned trying to make the characters out of Polymer Clay. You don't even really need to bake it, and to keep the clay clean. The only thing I really didn't like about this clay is that colors stick to each other and then you have random spots of color in the wrong places [ex. green spot on left arm when skin is tan, and shirt is yellow] - that's all really, and to [try] making the characters more detailed if possible....think like a producer. I think if you did that then you'd get really popular and could make something similar to Robot Chicken crossed with a Walking Dead claymation. Keep it up! - A. Analise
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